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OpenStudy (anonymous):

1] There are some exceptionally strange creatures swimming in the ocean depths. [2] Among the strangest is the lantern fish. [3] Its name says it all. [4] Its tiny organs produce light. [5] Its process for producing light is the same used by fireflies. [6] Its glowing lights are used to attract other fish on which they feed. What is the BEST way to improve the sentence fluency in the paragraph?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

The last 4 sentences begin with "its." I would combine some sentences, and change some wording.

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