Question

Can someone help me check my introduction?
Success for me mean doing something that you can be proud of yourself. You have overcome your obstacles and achieving your dreams. It also mean that you going to accomplish your goals in life. Making a difference in the lives around you. Success is the only way you going to accomplish your goals and going to be proud of what you have done.

Answer 1

It seems to say the same thing twice. Try something like this:

To me, success means doing something that you can be proud of yourself for. It means overcoming obstacles and reaching your goals; it means following your dreams; it means making a difference in someone’s life. If I can look in the mirror and be happy with the person I have become, I will consider myself a successful person.