Question

how my essay?
Maybe we've read or heard the phrase that said that “sit like a queen, not like a frog” at the toilet or somewhere else. In general, “Sit as queen,” referring to a person, who uses the toilet seat in the right way, while “sit like a frog,” refers to a person who is squatting on the toilet seat. In details, the whole phrase means the exact way to use the toilet is using the sitting toilet. In my view, “sitting like a frog” which referring to the position while using the squatting toilet is the best position. In this article, I will discuss the advantages of using squat toilets th

Answer 1

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Answer 2

what about the grammar?

Answer 3

In details, the whole phrase means the exact way to use the toilet is "using"(to use) the sitting toilet

Answer 4

I think it's fine considering the not-so-pleasant subject matter; it's a light-hearted intro, no?
However, you can improve these things in some ways:
- You're talking to the reader, so use 'you' and not 'we'
- "or somewhere else" is ambiguous, try to fix these ambiguities with, for example, "in popular culture' or something like that.
- "'Sit as queen,' referring" is wrong verb usage, say "'Sit like a queen' refers'". You also don't need that comma.
- No comma needed after 'a person', don't add unneeded commas. You want flow.
- " In details, the whole phrase means the exact way to use the toilet is using the sitting toilet." Does not make sense, it is best to rewrite this.
- "which referring" 'Which' is used as the subject, here (even though it's a pronoun), so you need to use the correct verb form, 'refers'.

Hope that helps & good luck!

Answer 5

thnx a lot.. :)