Question

check my answer ?
choose the smoothest way to combine these two sentences:
Our coach is new this year.
Our coach works us very hard at practice.

a) our new coach works us very hard at practice
B) our coach is new this year, and our coach works us very hard at practice.
c) Our coach is new this year.
D) Since our coach is new this year, our coach works us very hard at practice.

I think the answer is B but I also think it could be D.

Answer 1

i will g with D :l

Answer 2

okay thanks . whats the difference between B and D ?

Answer 3

b has an "and" while d is a run on with no "and"

Answer 4

Wait isn't a runon, it's just awkward as all of these choices are... but I would go with D since it is the better choice.

Answer 5

NO, the answer is not D.
Assuming the capitalization and punctuation mistakes are unintentional, the answer is A. It gives all of the important information without the awkwardness. However, the first word should be capitalized, and there should be a period at the end.

Answer 6

Yeah! If the grammatical errors are unintentional then I agree with Peeps.

Answer 7

okay , thank you !