If I am narrating the story and I want to make a comment or or ask a question of the reading audience, how do I do it? For instance-Well, Tyler was so startled by the guy that he stopped eating. “Alert the presses! He stopped eating."

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anonymous · Answer

If you are narrating you are already talking to an audience so there is no need for the quotation marks unless you are talking to another *character in your narrative.

anonymous · Answer

http://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/quotes.asp