Question

Can someone check my biography homework. My teacher made us to interview our peers. "Born in Los Angeles, California on November 1995, Miguel had a dream to be somebody in life. He is a young person who like to have fun like playing soccer and video games. He loves food, music, and others things that make him to be himself. Even though he timid and short he likes to play soccer and hope to reach his dreams to become a soccer player. Miguel has a interesting background and want to accomplish his goal to get his dreams come true. (This is my introduction)

Answer 1

"he is a young person who ~LIKES~ to have fun ~FORGET THE SECOND LIKE~ playing soccer and video games.

I'd rewrite the following sentence like this:
"He loves food, music, and other things that reflect who he is."

Even though HE'S (DON'T FORGET APOSTROPHE) timid and short, (DON'T FORGET COMMA) he likes to play soccer and fulfill his dreams of becoming a professional soccer player.

Miguel has AN (AN not A because following it is a word that starts with a vowel) interesting background and WANTS (not want) to accomplish his goals in life. (pick either dreams or goals, not both. that's too many "ands" and it sounds weird!)

Answer 2

This is the final draft, of how I would submit. Please do read over the corrections and understand them. You had some grammar errors, as well as funny sentence wording.

Born in Los Angeles, California on November 1995, Miguel has a dream to be somebody in life. He is a young person who likes to have fun playing soccer and video games. He loves food, music, and other things that reflect who he is. Even though he's timid and short, he likes to play soccer and fulfill his dreams of becoming a professional soccer player. Miguel has an interesting background and wants to accomplish his goals in life.