Question

Hows my poem?

Answer 1

Tears fall from the soul with guilt and hate.
She tried to love him but she couldn’t handle his feeling of life.
‘Life comes and goes. We don’t change.’ He always says.
She left him begging on the street for her not to leave.
As she said goodbye, two hearts were broken.
One loved the knife. The other loved the isolation.
Both of them feel the new pain.
We now have two guilty souls.

Answer 2

not bad :)

Answer 3

i wrote one about one month age and since them ive been trying to create emo but good poems. but people argue that all poems are emo. and they are noit so i will do more for myself and the school i go to.

Answer 4

its a little too straight forward try showing not telling

Answer 5

got it. thanks.