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Am I allowed to post my answer to an assignmeent and ask for others to look over it?

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Can someone reply?

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sure. that would be nice. at least we know you tried doing your work first before consulting, so feel free to post your answers for checking

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Also, let us know what in particular you are looking for. Spelling? Puncuation? Accuracy?

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Accuracy to the question.

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Question: If you knew that the world was going to come to an end in June 2013, how would you live your remaining months?




Life As We Knew It







Knowing the world would be coming to an end would be a big surprise. I would first choose to have as much fun as possible. Then, I would choose to be very cautious. Finally, I would choose to just live like I do at this moment in time. However, all of this time would be with my family.




First, I would have so much fun. I would want to go skydiving especially since I am afraid of heights. What would be a better time to conquer a fear, the world is ending right? I'd want to go to an amusement park and get the wristband where it allows you to cut the line. Then I'd go through every single ride and the best ones twice. As a matter of fact, I'd go to all the closest amusement parks and have the time of my life. Above all I'd want to play tennis with someone in my family. Even though I am not the best in the sport I can do okay for an amateur. Then again, I would like to race go karts on a huge track.




Without delay, I would want to get my hands on a Heckler & Koch VP70. Yes, a firearm is necessary especially when I know people will start going haywire. People do dumb things now, so if the world was going to end would they really care what they did? I'm pretty sure people would go to the extreme to do whatever they felt like doing. So a firearm would be as protection from the deranged people. Can't be to careful in a world where people kill others for sneakers. I mean how desperate can one be?




Finally, I would choose to live my life. Basically not having to worry about school would be fine enough. I would get on my PlayStation 3 and play my games. My family could have a tournament in Wheel of Fortune and Tennis. The last moments would just be better having fun. Who wants to sit around being depressed?




To summarize, if the world were going to end I would just do what I want. What's the worst that can happen? I believe people should just have fun and enjoy the time with their family. However, upon doing this people should act civilized. Then in the last month just live it one day at a time.

Answer 6

Very nice. You may want to check your intro words,eg. First, then, next, last. Let people know this is a 3 part plan. You may want to end with the gun part or begin with it since it intrupts the flow of doing. The FIRST thing you would do is to buy a firearm, then you'd go do your list of fun things, then see your family and have fun with them. You'd want a gun the whole time if that was your philosophy. (not judging either way.)

Answer 7

ok thanks