Question

Explain what is wrong with the sentence:
His motorcycle hit a parked car, but it wasn't damaged.

Answer 1

i have other sentences that need revision (supposedly)

Answer 2

I love Michigan beacause you see so many different kinds of clouds in the sky.

Answer 3

maybe a nicer way to write it is, "His motorcycle hit a parked car, but it didn't get damaged"

Answer 4

but i need to say what is wrong with the original sentence not just revise it

Answer 5

I love Michigan because you see so many different kinds of clouds in the sky. <--inconsistent subjects.

you used I and then you. You should stick to just using "I"

i.e.

I love Michigan because I see so many different kinds of clouds in the sky. <--inconsistent subjects.

Answer 6

i'll think about that motorcycle thing

Answer 7

THX!

Answer 8

one more too

Answer 9

i don't see any grammar errors in the first sentence o.O are you sure something is supposed to be wrong?

Answer 10

I saw the whole parade sitting on the library steps.

Answer 11

misplaced modifier

Answer 12

yea the directions say briefly explain what is wrong with each of these sentences.

Answer 13

your sentence makes it sound like the parade is sitting on the library steps

Answer 14

but how would i say that haha

Answer 15

do you mean how to change it?

Answer 16

nvrmd haha but thank you soooo much

Answer 17

now if i could just get the motorcylce one...

Answer 18

maybe it's a misplaced modifier too?

Answer 19

the only thing i can guess is saying it? idk

Answer 20

because you dont know if the car was damaged or the motorcycle

Answer 21

yeah that

Answer 22

you sure...?

Answer 23

well like i said, that's the only thing i see wrong. Grammar is correct. Just the modifier

Answer 24

ok well thank you!

Answer 25

welcome