Question

I have ten sentences that must be corrected for spelling, grammer, and puctuation for APA style. I would appreciate it if you could explain why the grammer parts should becorrected.
1. Toilet paper was first used in the 1300's.
2. The monkeys couldn't find the fruit.
3. The Ohio Board of Nursing (OBN) provides legal oversight for the practice of nursing in the state of Ohio.
4. Jamie could not here the instructions for the final exam.
5. It's fur was very tangled, and made grooming difficult.
6. The Nurse Practioner made several home visits.
7. 49 percent of the students received the h

Answer 1

number 1 is correct depending on your country

Americans use 1300's

British use 1300s

2. you don't use contractions so the right answer should be "could not"

3. I think you should add more details in that Ohio (somewhat like ISpringfield, Ohio)

4. Should be hear (as in to listen) not here

5. It's should be its (its is the possessive form; it's means it is)

6. i think you should'nt capitalize nurse practitioner

7. incomplete sentence

does that help?

Answer 2

Yes it helps alot thank you what about 6, 9, and 10? Especially 8 I am uncertain how to right percents out its confusing.

Answer 3

I meant 8, 9, and 10 in that sentence sorry

Answer 4

want to recheck your question?

Answer 5

you only have questions until 7 (and it's incomplete and cut off)

Answer 6

1. 1300s
2. could not
3. correct (the only one that is)
4. hear
5. Its and get rid of the comma between tangled and and.
6. Practioner is spelled wrong - Practitioner
7.Forty-nine percent
8. Comma between this and I, comma between surveys and I, analysis should be analyze.
9. The boys
10. take out the ( )