Question

Could anyone add up their Ideas in my introduction and check my grammar?The word culture could be defined as the language, beliefs, values, norms, behavior, and even material objects that are passed from one generation to the next. ([James M. Henslin], p.40). Learning culture is very influential to the people of today us it hold firmly the biography and history. It is a process of change within a man.

Answer 1

What is your thesis? Also, what are your THREE main points? They should be mentioned, so that your readers have an idea of what they are about to read.

The next three paragraphs will be discussing these three main points, with each paragraph covering only ONE point.

Then, your conclusion will have your thesis restated, and another mention of your three main points. This is a summary. No new information should be here.

Answer 2

Thanks for the suggestion

Answer 3

No problem. Good luck!