Hello,

First off I just want to start off telling you that I'm a horrible writier!!! I do not pretend to be a good one. However, I'm in school for my BSN (as per my jobs request) and I could use as much help as possible. So, this is the paper I wrote. It's supposed to be in APA format. Could you please read over it and give me suggestions on what to fix, add, or delete. Thank you!

So never lose an opportunity of urging a practical beginning, however small, for it is wonderful how often in such matters the mustard-seed germinates and roots itself. (Florence)
From the very beginni

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Hello, 

First off I just want to start off telling you that I'm a horrible writier!!!  I do not pretend to be a good one.  However, I'm in school for my BSN (as per my jobs request) and I could use as much help as possible.  So, this is the paper I wrote.  It's supposed to be in APA format.  Could you please read over it and give me suggestions on what to fix, add, or delete. Thank you!

So never lose an opportunity of urging a practical beginning, however small, for it is wonderful how often in such matters the mustard-seed germinates and roots itself. (Florence)  
From the very beginni