Question

can some one read this and let me how if it is good or not :)

Answer 1

I love guns so i will write a essay on guns that i shot or like and or don't like. I like handguns the most then A.K-47 are nice to they almost never jam. You can put a fully loaded Kalashnikov AK-47 in mud for up to two weeks and it will be just as good as new and it will not jam at all i have one and it is my best rifle. A handgun is a .44 Remington Magnum it is a powerful handgun but i like a 9mm Glock or a stub nose revolver .357 Magnum with hollow points. That is a good gun for the car because it is small and powerful. Over and under Derringer is the worst gun to own it misfires and is not safe it has no safety and if you drop it "it will go off" so just don't buy one. I like to bump fire my 9mm Glock if you don't know what that is it is when you hold the pistol in one hand and take the thum on your other hand and put it in the trigger guard and lock that arm in places then push forwards with the gun and the recoil will pull the gun back and you are still pushing it forwards so the gun will shoot full auto like a machine gun but it only works with semi auto guns so it it is a semi auto shotgun or any semi auto it will work as long as it is bigger then a 22.cal and not a revolver you can have fun "bump shooting". It mite be illegal to have a full auto gun but it is not illegal to shot a semi auto gun full auto.

Answer 2

I think it good.

Answer 3

no miss spellings

Answer 4

as i read i seen nothing.

Answer 5

cool

Answer 6

Well, it's kind of all over the place. I suggest you throw this copy in the trash and start from scratch. Here are some pointers:

You need 5 paragraphs, total.

Paragraph 1. Introduction: You need a thesis, here. Also, you need to mention your THREE main points (in this case, three types of guns) that you will cover. Tell your readers what they are about to read.

BODY PARAGRAPHS:
Paragraph 2. Discuss main point 1.

Paragraph 3. Discuss main point 2.

Paragraph 4. Discuss main point 3.

~ Each body paragraph should cover only ONE main point. Then move on to the next point and the next paragraph.

Paragraph 5. Conclusion: Restate your thesis, as well as your three main points. Tell your readers what they have just read.