My professor says that I need to add more details whenever I write. I try so hard to include details but it's not enough... What do I lack?

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lgbasallote · Answer

descriptions?

anonymous · Answer

It's a theory class and we have to apply the theory to real life. She asks for tons of details and I think that I did enough but it's still not the same for her.

lgbasallote · Answer

what do you mean by theories?

anonymous · Answer

organizational theories... contingency theory, systems theory, schein model etc....

anonymous · Answer

descriptions is all i can think of O_o

anonymous · Answer

Give real world examples that support your abstract concepts. Draw from your own experiences or those you know well, if at all possible.

anonymous · Answer

descripitons, adjective, details, but not too many details, or it becomes a bit much