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OpenStudy (nali):

Can someone plz help revise this paragraph? Before I saw “Most Evil”, I actually felt peaceful toward my friends and always had the feeling that they were compassionate toward me at all times and vice versa.

OpenStudy (nali):

I just need help with the grammar

OpenStudy (nali):

@kjmoney can u plz help?

OpenStudy (nali):

what do u mean ?

OpenStudy (nali):

charactristics of a pschopath: seem as if he is a nice person 1 out of every hundred are pschopath childhood hardships lead them to became serial killers if 1 out of every hundred are pschopath then there are 3 out of 300

OpenStudy (nali):

ok thanku

OpenStudy (nali):

@nincompoop i revised but i just need help with the last sentence plz help me Before I watched “Most Evil”, I thought that I can judge the person by his outside look and his actions. Yet, after becoming aware of the vast number of psychopaths in the world, my interaction with people differed. For instance, I thought that my friends were compassionate toward me at all times. However, after I became aware of the psychopath’s characteristics, it occurred to me that I might be a friend of a psychopath without knowing. As a result, I am going to be alert with the usage of my words and actions toward others.

OpenStudy (nali):

no but i do not know what else should i begin with

OpenStudy (nali):

the question was what is ur personal reaction to the movie?

OpenStudy (nali):

oh ok then thanku again but is the paragraph understandable or is it still confusing? @nincompoop

OpenStudy (nali):

ok then thanku :D

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