Question

would someone proof read this for me?? its a sonnet fro english class.
Susan Stiles
September 15, 2012
1.07 sonnets
Mrs. Boleski

Charlie Brown and Peppermint Patty
“Charlie likes Patty!” the kids all shout.
Peppermint patty smiles, she knows.
Charlie brown turns beet red, he protests.
I do not! He shouts and sputters, he does.
Peppermint Patty shouts with glee, he does!
Charlie brown, turns crimson, so embarrassed!
Peppermint Patty, he begins and stops.
I don’t want to be mean he says.
But, I don’t like you... I love you he shouts!!
Peppermint Patty what are you smiling abo

Answer 1

Oh, I know what you’re going to say, she says.
You do? Then were agreed, right says Charlie?
Agreed completely love, she says quietly.
And both go their separate ways, it’ll all work out.

I picked Charlie brown and peppermint patty because their relationship is so funny. I chose parody because I wanted the poem to be funny because their relationship is kind of funny .and I wanted give the reader something to think about. In this poem I chose to use pun and wit. The most challenging part for me was not taking even more time on it, because I really wanted it to be good. I enjoyed using my creativity to create something new. This poem emphasizes the hilarious relationship between patty and Charlie.