"there is a clear establishment at which point the Illuminati may begin to take interest in American development, and can be seen behind President Abraham Lincoln" I think the 'may' is not required grammatically and "there is a clear establishment at which point the Illuminati begin to take interest in American development, and can be seen behind President Abraham Lincoln." is good. What do you think??

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"there is a clear establishment at which point the Illuminati may  begin to take interest in American development, and can be seen behind President Abraham Lincoln" I think the 'may' is not required grammatically and "there is a clear establishment at which point the Illuminati begin to take interest in American development, and can be seen behind President Abraham Lincoln." is good. What do you think??

anonymous · Answer

Are you supposed to be revising the sentence?

anonymous · Answer

Yeah, I am doing the peer review and this sentence was used by my partner Just wanted to confirm myself before marking this as an error