Question

Please!? I have written my essay but can someone critic it? Please!

Answer 1

sure click attach a file and upload it

Answer 2

Thank You! I will upload it right now.

Answer 3

It is about the the The Devils Highway and how diction, theme and language is used to comment on the human condition.

Answer 4

well i wouldnt proofread a topic like that but if you upload it someone should help you.

Answer 5

Could you critic it still?

Answer 6

im sorry it's not you it's the topic. i just wouldnt read it period.

Answer 7

i can:?

Answer 8

Okay! Thank you! i will upload it right now.

Answer 9

This means alot! Thank you!

Answer 10

ok so in essay one- just a grammar error he uses word such as "bad medicine,"

Answer 11

Okay. Thank You.

Answer 12

you use it and is alot.. try to use diffrent words ?

Answer 13

Thank You. I will go back and use different words. Have you read all of it?

Answer 14

your welcome(: im on the second page

Answer 15

second page- second paragraph of its' self (should be changed to *itself)
"Trust is lost once they turn their back on you" *this* is a message that explains.

Answer 16

third page first paragraph to die a horrid death *this* is betrayal.
reading your paper out loud will help you see where you made mistakes.

i really enjoyed reading your paper ! .. it makes me want to read the book now..(:

Answer 17

I read itwrite know and i fixed many things plus the things you pointed out..Thank You so much!

Answer 18

So what did you think aboutit? Did i answer the topic correctly..use evidense and commented?

Answer 19

*evidence

Answer 20

yes you did and lots of quotes which is always good
do you have to type it then?

Answer 21

No. I have to hand write it. From a scale of 0-9what would you say? i know not a nine because i still need work, but pleasebe honest. Thank You

Answer 22

if you fix the word choice, punctuation errors and grammar..=7 1/2
(you should get around a B-)

if you dont fix them close to a 5..6 ish high C maybe..?

other than that i liked it.

Answer 23

(i hoped that helped!)

Answer 24

Thank You so much! It really helped! Thank You!

Answer 25

your welcome(: