Question

Can someone help me to write a request letter. Im not an English native speaker, that is why I still have problem with that.

I am asking for a new desktop in my apartment; the reasons are the following.

(1) It is too old (mainly)
(2) It is noisy when I use it

Thanks in advance,

Answer 1

I'll try to help you

Answer 2

ok thanks

Answer 3

Dear ___________,
Subject- Request for a new desktop PC
I've got an old desktop in my apartment ,it is quite old and it's not meeting my requirements. Kindly provide me a new desktop PC.
Thanking you,
yours faithfully
________________

Answer 4

Fill in the first blank with the name of the person, you are making the request to.
Second blank- fill in your name.

Answer 5

Yeah Im doing this. Wait a minut for you to see the final version. It looks great. Thanks mate

Answer 6

@emunrradtvamg I think the letter I posted would be fine, but you also ask others to verify this before sending it.

Answer 7

You're welcome :)

Answer 8

look, this is the last version

Answer 9

September 20, 2012


Dear Residenza UNICAL staff,

Subject- Request for a new desktop PC

I've got an old desktop in my apartment ,it is quite old and it's not meeting my requirements. Kindly provide me a new desktop PC.

Thanking you,
yours faithfully
Ing. Luis M. Villamagua

Answer 10

Looks good:)

Answer 11

This part is good? Is that how it must go?

Thanking you,
yours faithfully
Ing. Luis M. Villamagua

Answer 12

or should I choose one of them, coz for me sound like the same both

Answer 13

yeah, it looks fine

Answer 14

ok, thank you very much again. many medals for you mate

Answer 15

you're welcome :)