Question

Is this a good introduction
Have you ever had a memory that had an effect or an impact on your life? Is it good or bad? Well, since you are reading my essay, I will tell you a memoir that had an impact on my life. It was two years ago Just when my lie couldn’t be any better BOOM!

Answer 1

i would say thats a good intro.:)

Answer 2

can you help me edit it

Answer 3

what do you need edited? looks good to me.:)

Answer 4

what gared are you in?

Answer 5

sorry typo i meant grade

Answer 6

oh im a sophmore..:)

Answer 7

I feel like its not good
i need an someone elses thoughts or opinion

Answer 8

In high school what state or country

Answer 9

I AM a senior

Answer 10

in Middle school :(

Answer 11

ok well did u mean to write lie or was that supposed to be life? i think it was supposed to be life..

Answer 12

:)

Answer 13

where

Answer 14

what do you mean

Answer 15

twards the end ish..

Answer 16

oop. typo..

Answer 17

ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I see its supposed to be life
you know word check doesnt check grammer so I need peers to edit

Answer 18

Thank You

Answer 19

Gotta Go Bye
Have to write my essay
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Answer 20

gtg bye!

Answer 21

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