So I was wondering if I could get some input on this opening statement to a DBQ.

Topic: To what extent was the new constitution necessary and why?

Introduction: The United States after the Revolutionary War was like a slave given unlimited freedom. They both dreamed about this day, but when it came they knew not what they should do first. There first though was to draft a document to form the government from which to lead public policy and this document was the "Articles of Confederation". Running the government for about eight years people started to realize the errors and flaws that...

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So I was wondering if I could get some input on this opening statement to a DBQ.

Topic: To what extent was the new constitution necessary and why?

Introduction: The United States after the Revolutionary War was like a slave given unlimited freedom. They both dreamed about this day, but when it came they knew not what they should do first. There first though was to draft a document to form the government from which to lead public policy and this document was the "Articles of Confederation". Running the government for about eight years people started to realize the errors and flaws that...

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...flaws that their new government had, and on March 4, 1789 the Articles of Confederation were replaced with the Constitution.