Question

plz edit my sentence for grammar errors
Furthermore, to show how Beowulf was old and strong at the same time, I drew an old man with a white beard yet have a muscular body.

Answer 1

@monokerous @Agent47 @fahminator

Answer 2

There are no grammar errors Nali, the sentence is just fine.

Answer 3

ok but the part of contrast "white beard yet have a muscular body"

is that right ?

Answer 4

@bloodrain

Answer 5

no, it's not right

Answer 6

one mistake

Answer 7

I drew an old man with a white beard and a ________ muscular body

Answer 8

you can put in many things in the _______
but not yet

Answer 9

such as , "and a surprisingly muscular body"

Answer 10

but what you wrote is not right

Answer 11

i knew there was something wrong ok then thanku fahminator

Answer 12

hm i dont think that is right let me try again

Answer 13

maybe "and yet a muscular body"

Answer 14

@fahminator is what bloodrain said is right?

Answer 15

This sounds better tell me if you think so:
'Furthermore, to show how Beowulf was old and strong at the same time, I drew an old man with a white beard and a muscular body.'

Answer 16

yes i think it sounds much better thanku

Answer 17

your welcome

Answer 18

can u plz help me with another sentence

Answer 19

and yet a muscular body. Cause with the "yet" in there its becoming more comparitive.

Answer 20

thats true i guess
'Furthermore, to show how Beowulf was old and strong at the same time, I drew an old man with a white beard and yet a muscular body.'

Answer 21

so which one is it ??

iam confused

Answer 22

the one i just posted

Answer 23

but does not have "yet" and yet is not supposed to be in that sentence

Answer 24

no this one
'Furthermore, to show how Beowulf was old and strong at the same time, I drew an old man with a white beard and yet a muscular body.'

Answer 25

yes it has 'yet' in it

Answer 26

it is ok i got it

Answer 27

can u help me with the other sentence that i tagged u in