can you check my thesis statement. it am writing a compare and contrast about two stories on how they use literary element to develop the theme.
Through many similarity's and differences that were shown in the stories"Sleepy" and "Young Goodman Brown" by Nathanial Hawthorne,Anton Chekhov show many character traits that makes the character's personalty change. The elements and character traits will show how the characters change into a psychotic human being by having negative conflict in the story, and suggests that happiness requires patience and hard work.
can you check if there is any erro

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can you check my thesis statement. it am writing a compare and contrast about two stories on how they use literary element to develop the theme.
Through many similarity's and differences that were shown in the stories"Sleepy" and "Young Goodman Brown" by Nathanial Hawthorne,Anton Chekhov show many character traits that makes the character's personalty change. The elements and character traits will show how the characters change into a psychotic human being by having negative conflict in the story, and suggests that happiness requires patience and hard work.
can you check if there is any erro