Question

can someone help me with a thesis please??
-High schools should prepare high school students for the expectations and demands for college, so high schools should consider helping students manage their time better, give them harder classes; these changes might take time but will help students be prepared for college in advance.

Answer 1

Read this... I just changed it a bit to sound a bit better :)

High schools should prepare high school students for the expectations and demands for college. High schools should also consider helping students manage their time better.They should aid them with harder classes. These changes will take time, but will help students be prepared for college in advance.
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Answer 2

can i combine the sentences to make it in one and that will be my thesis?

Answer 3

not really. it would be a huge run on sentence!

Answer 4

okay thank you very much:)