Question

can someone proof read my essay.

Answer 1

you can add suggestions if you want

Answer 2

Post the file in a format known by computers please.

Answer 3

its word for mac

Answer 4

I do not use mac. Try posting it as a .txt file.

Answer 5

okay let me see btw ty for helping

Answer 6

Give me about a day. This will require some time. You can expect it by tomorrow. When I'm done, I'll send you a link as a message.

Answer 7

okay np

Answer 8

one sec it did not upload all the way

Answer 9

do u see what I uploaded

Answer 10

I see the .htm file but it's not completed all the way.

Answer 11

okay

Answer 12

one sec brb my computer is frozen -.-

Answer 13

wait its okay

Answer 14

thats my whole essay so far its just double spaced

Answer 15

Does it where it says "That is what the American Dream is all about \." ?

Answer 16

yes that is a typo.

Answer 17

Perfect. I'll get this back to you before the end of tomorrow.

Answer 18

feel free to add suggestions to make to longer.

Answer 19

well gtg thank you bye.

Answer 20

@B.R.M I fixed your word doc and if you give me a few minutes i can proofread it for you. I have posted a fixed version (not proofread yet though)

Answer 21

@B.R.M I have uploaded a proofread version for you, I think you need to look it over and add more detail in some places. I have fixed it as best as I can without totally rewriting it.

Answer 22

please ask me if you have any more questions

Answer 23

Here you go B.R.M. Here is your revised essay. The changes I made are in red. The crossed out parts are the parts that I removed, and uncrossed red means that that is what I have added. I would suggest you make the necessary changes yourself, while you go over this. If you don't understand a word, either look it up, or replace it with whatever you feel more comfortable with.

Answer 24

thank you very much @hkim I really appreciate it. :)

Answer 25

also @bloodrain