can some1 help me with this paper, thanks??? I'll attach it. Thanks again

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in your first paragraph you should write the summary from the article or whatever you use for you essay, write about statistic , any useful info about underage drinking. Then, in first paragraph you should write the thesis sentence, for instance, "according to this information, it is hard to disagree, how the underage drinking is harmful" or anything like that. next...

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next, you write your next paragraphs with topic sentence and support things, and conclusion in the end of each paragraphs

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in the end of the essay dont forget to write a conclusion. no new info in conclusion paragraph!

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hope this help you to edit your writhing! good luck!

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can you highlight the points that you are talking about or make the changes, and is the APA style correct and can you highlight and correct that. Thanks once again, Thank you

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i will do it later, tomorrow

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too late for today) sorry

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can thanks, sorry to catch you late. I would greatly appreciate it and ill email and tell you my final grade. Thanks