I need to write a letter to Beowulf explaining how he is a hero. can someone please proof read what i have so far and help me continue on writing this letter?

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this is what i have so far for my letter:
Dear Mr. Beowulf,
I hope you have had a restful summer and a safe one. I’m writing to you this fine evening in regards to your excellent work in protecting your people. I just want to start off by expressing how much of a hero you are to so many individuals and myself. You give the people such security and peace. Thank you for that.
Your fine works on defending the kingdom from the dragon was just one of many trials you went through to protect the kingdom, you don’t see many noble men such as yourself taking on such heroic adventures and putting their lives in danger to save the lives of other people as you do for us.