Question

can someone please help me write an essay i been trying to write for a long time but dont understand :( help

Answer 1

As the new nation grew, prior to the Civil War, the country benefited from the contributions of a variety of individuals and groups. Assess the contributions made by Americans representing at least two of the following groups:

Women
Native Americans
African Americans

Answer 2

Women- kitchen
Native Americans- land
African Americans- free labor (slaves)

Answer 3

Politically correct, as always.

Answer 4

It's also technically correct.

Answer 5

pretty much nailed it

Answer 6

no thats the prompt

Answer 7

wow i didnt get a medal for my answer this is madness

Answer 8

(pre-civil war) so a bunch of women, Native Americans, and Africans walk into a bar ... who pays the bill?

Answer 9

The most important women back then were usually the wives of politicians. Abigail Adams most likely paid her husband's beer tab, and also pressured him to make society less oppressive to women. Unfortunately, Mr. Adams did nothing of the sort. She also asked him to go against slavery.

Answer 10

wrong ...

NOBODY PAID!
women belonged in kitchens, Natives didn't hit the bar they were too busy raindancing around bruning teepees, and africans were too busy singing sappy songs while picking cotton

Answer 11

it's a 5 pararaph essay can someone help me write the introduction paragraph

Answer 12

DAMN i'm good!!

Answer 13

Not really. Citations please!

Answer 14

medal medal medal

Answer 15

Girl, it ain't that hard to go on Wikipedia and copy-paste their citations.

Answer 16

citations for what that was written by me and the supporting paragraphs can include citations when she quotes or paraphrases

Answer 17

you should copy and paste to google and see if i copied it from anywhere.... i wrote that ..

Answer 18

"contributions made by them are vast"

Vague assertion. Rather than saying their contributions were vast, say exactly what they did.

"during the era before the American Civil War they made major contributions to contemporary times."

Tautological followup from the previous statement.

Answer 19

thats the INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH wtf r u a NEWB dude its part of the pre thesis

Answer 20

you dont support your claims in the FIRST PARAGRAPH lmao wth you're trolling just stop

Answer 21

Girl, you should never make technically incorrect statements. Follow the CMS http://www.chicagomanualofstyle.org/home.html .

Answer 22

I'm sorry, "vague" statements. Not technically incorrect.

Answer 23

lmao @ chicago style how do u know if its not ASA or MLA

Answer 24

Okay, you can go to any of the two and they will say the same thing. Instead of using "contributions were vast" as a hook and repeating it, maybe you could bring up a specific example. Technical writing 101.

Answer 25

stop osaying "girl" r u gay ? your attempts at being ghetto and "hood" are funny

Answer 26

I'm just trying to be fabulous. Why you hatin on the gays?

Answer 27

kill yoself

Answer 28

this is going to far !! i just need help

Answer 29

i wrote your first paragraph u have my permission to use it freely =P good luck sara

Answer 30

i dont understand it

Answer 31

what grade r u in

Answer 32

11th

Answer 33

oh then that paragrpah should be perfect what dont u understand