Question

The following sentence may have an error in effective writing. The sentence or part of the sentence is *starred*. Choose the best revision for the *starred* part. If no revision is necessary, choose the first answer.

A huge *statue had been carved from a rare African tree in the living room.*

A. statue had been carved from a rare African tree in the living room.

B. statue in the living room had been carved from a rare African tree.

C. statue from a rare African tree had been carved in the living room.

D. statue from a rare African tree in the living

Answer 1

My answer: B
am i right?? :D

Answer 2

B. statue in the living room had been carved from a rare African tree.

Answer 3

yes you are right!

Answer 4

yay!! whaddya think @hero?? look like B to you too?? :D

Answer 5

"B"

Answer 6

I'm not so sure I agree. I have to check with an expert again. There's a specific order to introduce certain clauses and phrases.

Answer 7

lol all he does is use an expert...

Answer 8

hahaa care to share who that expert is?? or still can;t tell?? haha and eh whatevs whatever works :)

Answer 9

I don't always use an expert. This is not Who Wants to Be a Millionaire

Answer 10

"Ask an Expert"
"Phone a Friend"

lol

Answer 11

hahaa i see what you did there now :) wait so is my answer B?

Answer 12

Yes, it is B. And that's not from the expert.

Answer 13

I realize I had to put my common sense cap on.

Answer 14

dur...

Answer 15

I gave you a medal, you should be happy.

Answer 16

lol :) u guys are TOO FUNNY!! :) thanks :) and i'll give you a medal then @hero :)

Answer 17

@jim_thompson5910 can u pls give @countonme123 a medal for me? :) thank youuu :D

Answer 18

thanks bro