Question

Can u guys help my friend write a poem? thanks!

Answer 1

Write a poem about what I see at the park.. this is the topic

Answer 2

Poems are not fun unless you write them yourself.

Answer 3

Iknow.. but its not for me.. my friend needs help nd i dont wanna do the work.. Haa so im just askin to see if sumone can :)

Answer 4

Tell her to use her creativity and make a masterpiece. Then we can all read it and fix it if needs be.

Answer 5

How long does it have to be?

Answer 6

I dont think it has to b that long.. i think he wouldnt care.. just wants the work done.

Answer 7

lol is he your boy friend?

Answer 8

Haa na just a friend :)

Answer 9

Okay first, what do you see in a park?
Next, just write it all down....
Figure out what you see/hear/smell/touch first whne you go to the park

Answer 10

What do you want to tell the reader of the poem about first? How you hear the crunch of the leaves (well more like the "Shlop" since they're wet and soggy) or the smell of crisp cold air? or the squirrels running up and down trees chattering loudly? or the feel of the rough cold bark of a tree?

Answer 11

Ur real good at thie @LifeIsADangerousGame can u please write a poem? my friend needs help nd ha i dont wanna do the work lol

Answer 12

Is it for school or something? A poem isn't really that hard

Answer 13

Yess.. hes really behind nd i feel bad if i cant help him. plz! :))

Answer 14

A poem won't take him that long though, I'm willing to walk him through it :D

Answer 15

When you go to the park, what do you see?
A bench,some grass, a tree?
I see more than that,
The man on the bench that is fat.
I see many kids at play,
Enjoying this beautiful day.
Flowers all around,
Stretching upward bound.
I see birds of many kinds,
Eating their delicious finds.
I see a lot you know...
At least I think so.


LOL i just typed this right now. do not laugh at me .

Answer 16

Thats real good @countonme123 for just writing it now :) Im sure he dont care wat it sounds like ha just wants it done :D

Answer 17

lol thanks.That's my poem I guess. Maybe you will find a better one. Cya.

Answer 18

@LifeIsADangerousGame can u think of one?

Answer 19

Well yea if you still want one

Answer 20

yess i wuld like to show both to him nd he can chose :) i would appreiate it alot!!

Answer 21

u still there @LifeIsADangerousGame ?

Answer 22

Yes, I am almost done

Answer 23

She must be really working on a good one.

Answer 24

Ha yeahh :)

Answer 25

Thanks :)

Answer 26

Okay,

I breathed deeply, sighing contently as I walk in the park
The smell of Fall was in the air
The weather was crisp and cool,
I watched as leaves slowly dance on the breeze
falling gently on the ground without a care
I look up at the squirrel in the tree, chattering noisily with a twitch of his nose
It whips its tail back and forth above my head and
"Achoo!" I scare him away with a sneeze
Yes Fall is in the air,
I can see it from the red noses on children
As they run around bundled up to laughing as they run as fast as they dare
Yes Fall is here
The season of hot chocolate and snow
Where leaves fall from the sky to and fro
The season of earmuffs and mittens and coats
and pretty blue scarfs to keep warm your throat ^_^

It doesn't rhyme at all places but it's a poem :p

Answer 27

Definitely better...

Answer 28

@LifeIsADangerousGame thanks so much!! i let u know which one he chose :)) ha

Answer 29

lol you don't have to, it's not a competition

Answer 30

I know..alright i wont :)

Answer 31

haha

Answer 32

If there isn't a metric requirement involved, tell your friend to write a freestyle haiku. Always the easy choice to go for if you are not feeling that much creative for a longer text.
Something like:
Spring time:
On an old park bench I see
an old love of mine

Or

A goose heading to the park
“Look what they’ve done.”
Migration can wait

Always saved me from writing more complicated poems ^^

Answer 33

Without the 'old' repetition, was unnoticed.

Answer 34

Alright thanks @bmp ill let him know

Answer 35

No problem :-)