Question

can someone be so kind to check my essay?

Answer 1

where is it

Answer 2

i can help

Answer 3

@bakonloverk

Answer 4

I'm not sure how your teacher does it, but usually in an essay, you shouldn't use personal pronouns.

Answer 5

Also, try not to use "good"-- it is really vague.

Answer 6

yeah i think other than the mistakes that @Youngster said its very well written

Answer 7

2 paragraphs is kinda weird... conclusion?
usually its intro, 3 body, conclusion

Answer 8

so ur saying tht an essay should be 4 paragraphs?

Answer 9

usually its 5, but 4 is okay if u only have 2 points

Answer 10

oh ok i didnt post this question but thank you anyways u answered a question i was about to post

Answer 11

well it doesnt have to be essay format, its not really an essay its just the answer of a question that we had