Question

can someone check this intro?

Answer 1

At one point or another, we have all been exposed to the famous drug marijuana. Every person in the world will either hear or speak about the controversy of legalizing this drug. Whether it is to benefit the economy of a state or medical practice. Most of the population in the United States has a closed perspective of what marijuana is. Many see is as a addictive drug that will soon end the lives of many consumers, while others regard to see as a cure to symptoms caused by terminal diseases. My goal is to research both parts of the stories in order to answer my question of whether medical marijuana should be legal for those who suffer of terminal diseases?

Answer 2

i fixed it

Answer 3

At one point or another we have all been exposed to the famous drug marijuana. Every person in the world will either hear or speak about the controversy of legalizing this drug at one point in their lives. Whether it is to benefit the economy of a state or medical practice, marijuana has always been a major subject of discussion. The majority of citizens in the United States has a closed perspective of what marijuana causes to the society overall. Many see it as an addictive drug that will soon end the lives of many consumers, while others regard to it as a cure to symptoms caused by terminal diseases. My goal is to research both parts of the stories in order to answer my question of whether medical marijuana should be legal for those who suffer of terminal diseases?

Answer 4

At one point or another, we have all been exposed to the famous drug marijuana. Every person in the world will either hear or speak about the controversy of legalizing this drug. [Whether it is to benefit the economy of a state or medical practice.] THIS IS NOT A SENTENCE. JOIN IT TO THE PREVIOUS ONE. Most of the population in the United States has a closed perspective of what marijuana is. Many see is[IT] as a[N] addictive drug that will soon end the lives of many consumers, while others regard[THIS WORD IS USED INCORRECTLY. TRY THE WORD PREFER.] to see [IT] as a cure to symptoms caused by terminal diseases. My [IS IT APPROPRIATE TO SPEAK IN THE FIRST PERSON FOR THIS PAPER? IF NOT, TRY "THE GOAL OF THIS PAPER".] goal is to research both parts of the stories [SINGULAR; STORY] in order to answer my [THE] question of whether [OR NOT] medical marijuana should be legal for those who suffer of [FROM] terminal diseases?[PERIOD. THIS IS NOT A QUESTION.]

Answer 5

thank you!

Answer 6

how can i say "Every person in the world will either hear or speak about the controversy of legalizing this drug due to it's benefits and (the bad part of it)

Answer 7

You're welcome. Where is it? You have two paragraphs posted that are very similar but that both have errors.

Answer 8

well i used the paragraph that you fixed

Answer 9

Not the ones that are on here?
I also saw one more thing. Rewrite the second sentence so that it is in the past participle to follow the lead of the first one.

Answer 10

"has either heard or spoken"?

Answer 11

Yes, use that to replace " will either hear or speak".