Question

can u help my english essay ??
actually this is my first english essay so im not sure I'm in rite way
and also im really really bad and word choice and grammar so i need help !!! plzz !!

Answer 1

no one help me :(

Answer 2

what do you need help with?

Answer 3

i need to correct my grammar and words that i used

Answer 4

and i dont know how to write essay so i wrote just sort of my essay but im not sure im in right way

Answer 5

it makes me in panic :'(

Answer 6

haha:)

Answer 7

oh I'm gonna post it wait just a second !

Answer 8

whats ur email?

Answer 9

Ok, you have to make sure you have the authors name if its a book, the title aswell as a contention, the contention is your overall opinion (From my essay the outsiders: "The outsiders demonstrats that exeriances are brutal everywhere.) Then you have to have Ideas, an idea is what you will base your paragraphs on.

Each Paragraph starts with one of your ideas, and then depending on the length of your essay, you should have at least 3 evidence points to support your idea (Topic Sentence). After each evidence, you should have an example for each evidence point. After you have done all three you have to have a linking sentance, you can either have a linking forward sentance or a normal linking sentance, each have to link on to the next topic sentance of your next paragraph. (eg. From The Outsiders:It is clear that all three of the Curtis brothers face hard experiences and decisions, however they are not the only people in their town who have it rough all over.)

Repeat this stage for Paragraph 2 and 3

For the Conclusion, remember your contention from the start of the introduction, write the similar thing, but not exactly the same, (change the main words) After that, re-write similar ideas to your ideas in your introduction.

Remember do not use the grammer "I, we, me, our". Keep it in third person and do not meantion yourseld.

Hope this helps!!

- Tiny Monster

Answer 10

Post the essay and I will look at it for you.