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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Intro help! thanks! :D

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Each and every adolescent’s task is to become a unique individual with a valued sense of self in society. To find out, whom you are and learn from someone’s mistakes or your own. Each single adolescent has experienced a different parenting style; authoritarian, permissive, and authoritative. Some may have had a mixture of two or just one parenting style. It all depends on the parent and also how they grew up is influenced. In my essay I am going to quickly review the three parenting styles and explain which parenting style I would use for my future kids.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Is this good or should i change somthing?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Seems a bit long. And i never really thought it was good to mention the essay as "an essay". I'm talking about the last sentence

OpenStudy (anonymous):

other than that it's okay. Try taking out a sentence or two that you don't think needs to be. or shortening the sentencing

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Okk thanks!! nd my into gots to b 5 sentences Heres what it has to b about, if it helps; The task of an adolescent is to become a unique individual with a valued sense of self in society. Explain each of the parenting styles listed in your lessons. Imagine you are a parent of an adolescent. Choose one of the parenting styles and explain why this style will help your adolescent become a valued individual with a sense of self in society. Write at least five paragraphs.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

It's good if you just get rid of the last sentence. That would be 5 sentences right?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

:D alright thanks!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

anytime

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