Question

You need to write an editorial about a celebrity coming to town. What is wrong with this opening sentence?

Sengs Pourlee will arrive in town Wednesday to appear at the kickoff ceremony of the Spring Fair. Tickets will cost $50 each.

Grammatically correct sentences cannot begin with a proper noun.

The sentence ends with a verb, which is a common error.

An editorial requires opinion, which is not expressed here.

People will not care that there is a celebrity coming to town.

Answer 1

@Agent_Sniffles

Answer 2

I think its the 3rd choice.

Answer 3

An editorial requires opinion, which is not expressed here.