can someone proof read my book plz?

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anonymous · Answer

I will!

anonymous · Answer

Okay Im done

bakonloverk · Answer

is there anything wrong with it?

anonymous · Answer

nope

anonymous · Answer

its amazing...well...hmm

anonymous · Answer

The letters are dated in 1992, right?

bakonloverk · Answer

yea they r its supposed 2 b a passed tence story

anonymous · Answer

*its a past tence story----yea i figured that but i mean did people do all those things in 1992? I mean my mother didnt..well i dont think she did..my point is ."Is it realistic for that time period"??

bakonloverk · Answer

ummm idk

anonymous · Answer

haha well ask your parent if people did that..or people alive then. and another thing is you dont say who elizabeth is, or who seth is. You should give more information about the whole situation and why Lizzy left. Where did she go?...r u still writing the story?

bakonloverk · Answer

oh its not suposed 2 say who hey are tht part is reviled at the end of the book

anonymous · Answer

oh, so your still writing the book?

anonymous · Answer

well i would luv to buyy that book!!! I hope I helped you.

anonymous · Answer

Oh and dont post you writings of anything you make online....cuz somebody might steak it so be careful. (I dont mean me lol, Im just giving advice) Okay again, I really liked your atoryline and I hope I helped you

bakonloverk · Answer

kk thank you very much and yea u did help me

anonymous · Answer

Good, glad I did. bye :)

bakonloverk · Answer

bye :D

anonymous · Answer

Oh yes, i also wanted to say that there were a few minor spellin mistakes. so you should review to fix those.

bakonloverk · Answer

oh ok thank you ill fix  them

anonymous · Answer

KK...and you might wanna close the question and delete it.

bakonloverk · Answer

yea im going 2