Question

Can someone proof my paper? I'd really appriciate it. It was an antalytic essay with my thesis statement being, Yes, all high school students should be required to get additional education or training because it will give the student more skill, allow them to get a better job, and it’s for the overall good of the people.

Answer 1

Sure..I just finished proofreading a book..lol

Answer 2

Wow. Well no I know I have an expert! lol keep in mind I am only a freshman haha...

Answer 3

now*

Answer 4

haha okay

Answer 5

wowww, you just blew my mind..lol

Answer 6

Is that good? lol

Answer 7

yess...just checking. It is all your words, correct?

Answer 8

My words? ..... I dont really know what that means

Answer 9

I just did a plagerism test...and they are all you words. congradulations..lol

Answer 10

It means, 'Did you cheat?'

Answer 11

Oh lol, no i didnt. How am i looking?

Answer 12

Good.

Answer 13

But I do think that you should try to sort of make it your own. Do you know what I mean?

Answer 14

Not really... haha

Answer 15

hmmm....okay

Answer 16

For example: In the first paragraph, the sentance starts out with "Yes" Well this shows that you are writing an assignment. To make it your own....okay well im getting into it a lot...do you wanna hear or??

Answer 17

yes yes i wanna know how to make my essay better

Answer 18

youre saying i should say something like "i believe that...." making it seem as though it really is coming from me?

Answer 19

Yes, precisely!

Answer 20

oh ok. i can do that! Thanks a bunch. any other mistakes or ways to better the essay?

Answer 21

just a few minor spelling mistakes. Im sure if you go back and review it you will find them.

Answer 22

Awesome. Thanks so much!

Answer 23

No problem...Its what I do! Hope I helped. byee