Question

Help me better my paragraph? Just revise it or tell me what could be better? Its suppose to be illustrative. Here you go. Thanks!

Answer 1

Illustrative topic:
Even the busiest people can incorporate more exercise into their daily routine.
Paragraph:
Even the busiest people can incorporate more exercise into their daily routine. Whether it is from walking to jogging, stretching to lifting, it all makes a difference. Some people make excuses and say they have work and they are too busy to exercise. How about riding a bike to work that day or while running errands jog rather than walk. Instead of sitting down waiting for something or someone you could stretch or do jumping jacks. On the other hand you might not even know what you’re doing is an exercise. By simply taking the stairs instead of the elevator, or doing all the household chores, you get in a small workout. Not only is it healthy for you but it also benefits and encourages others. Parking further from the college or wherever you are going to get a good walk in, is also a good workout! You don’t need hours to exercise all you really need is a couple minutes every here and there.