Question

any imporovement suggestions on my descriptive essay? the assignment is to decribe a town of Anglo-saxons day in an animals perspective.

My legs ache feverishly from the extensive journey I had taken from home to town. My owner has no idea how famishing it is to pull him and his wave for such a length of time. I’ve been to town many times and I know from experience what is to come.
As I come to the edge of town I take an astronomic breath of the foul sordid air. I take in the unsightly surroundings. I feel a chilling shiver travel down my spine. I’ve visited many times, but it’s so differe