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OpenStudy (anonymous):

How do I make this sentence flow better? "Two white eyelets like empty windows the size of a pencil eraser decorated the inner sides of each shoe."

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Two white eyelets, like empty windows, the size of a pencil eraser, decorated the inner sides of each slope. Not sure if this helps...

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