Question

Brand New Song
Check it out if yu havent and like or comment!!!!!

Answer 1

Red
the color of blood we shed
somebody call the meds
cause with im alive
but with out you im dead
I'm just the truth be said
I'm waiting on you
So I can be led
you can take it to the head
or we can take it to the bed
I promise you baby you will always be fed
you r ma daily bread
you r 1 of a kind and cant be read
dont disappear on me
or ima have to call the feds
lets stick together and maybe have a wed

Tbh girl you should be mines
tbh you are fine
lets take it to ma crib and have a sip of wine
on you, i'll spend every dime
i'll travel the distance
who cares about the climb
my motivation is you
which stays on ma mind
you can probably make the blind see
shoot look wat yu did to me
Im whipped
let the hold world see
i dont care, ima let it be

I fall for yur type
this feeling, feels so rite
i need to be careful cause she might bite
me and her dont fight
our love is just too strong of a might
but everything isn't alrite
idont want you to get confuse
of blow a fuse
why is there someone tht always has to lose
somebody hand me some boose
Cause i already told you i cant stop thinking of you

Answer 2

AWWWWW THIS IS SO CUTEEEEE

Answer 3

thanx Brenna :) You the first one to see it! lol

Answer 4

I love it!!!<333333333
Its good as always♥

Answer 5

Thanx Alxy glaad yu like it!

Answer 6

its really good and cute, but too much rhyming. focus more on meaning and rhyme every other line together or two lines then start a new. :)

Answer 7

lol, ok
i just started writting not to long ago by the way

Answer 8

well for a start its pretty good :) keep it up ! i have been writing for about 2 years now.

Answer 9

lol, thanx

Answer 10

np