Question

New song, take a look!

Answer 1

I go on

Walking these halls
seeing these walls
reliving memories
you're still a part of me

A flat red line
a blinding light
it's so unclear
when you're not here

You're gone I know
but somehow I just can't let go

I will not die
your life for mine
I will survive
for you and I
now one more time your life for mine
still I won't die
for you and I

Breathing this air
this just is not fair
with the walls closing in
every now and again

You're gone I know
but somehow I just can't let go

I will not die
your life for mine
I will survive
for you and I
now one more time your life for mine
still I won't die
for you and I

And I know that you're gone
but your legend goes on
you said to move on
but I just can't

I will not die
your life for mine
I will survive
for you and I
now one more time your life for mine
still I won't die
for you and I

I will not die
your life for mine
I will survive
for you and I
now one more time your life for mine
still I won't die
for you and I

You're gone I know
but somehow...

Answer 2

I would like to dedicate this song to a couple of people for a couple of reasons...

First, to Gaby. @bobbylynn a lot of us know what you're going through, but very few of us can truly understand it. While I may not be one of these people, this song is. I hope that this song serves for you a light and a hope.

Secondly, this song is dedicated to my good friend Susan. @Susan9419 may this song recompense for the time we won't have.

And lastly, this song is dedicated to anyone whom it may serve a purpose. Whatever you're going through, my life for yours.

Answer 3

Awww, this is really good :)

Answer 4

You really think so?

Answer 5

Yeah, it's awesome!

Answer 6

Haha cool. I kinda thought it sucked at first lol

Answer 7

Nope!! it's really good :)

Answer 8

Haha cool! It's pretty awesome that people actually like my stuff!

Answer 9

this sound real dope, i wished i wrote this, no lie

Answer 10

Haha wow @Josuelito Ive seen some of your stuff, it's pretty down. :)

Answer 11

wow this is real good

Answer 12

Thank ye thank ye

Answer 13

aww thanks thats really sweet and i like it its really good u want me to sing it??

Answer 14

If you want to heck YES. What I was thinking was (somehow) we could both sing it, you know if that's cool. Like Seether and Amy Lee, ya know?

Answer 15

haha ok then maybe but idk how we can i dont live anywhere near u unless we do bits and peices and send it together and u can put them together idk lol

Answer 16

Seether and Amy Lee :)

Answer 17

^

Answer 18

And yeah well where d you live btw? Im in New mexico -_- so yeah we could do that too

Answer 19

califronia but i am moving to Colorado soon i think idk yet

Answer 20

Haha cool. Well idk sing it if you want, I'd love to see it!

Answer 21

ok ill try to when i get time

Answer 22

Awesome. :) Don't rush yourself, I'm not anticipating anything, k?

Answer 23

Seether and Amy Lee

Answer 24

ok thanks so much

Answer 25

Haha your welcome. And for what exactly?

Answer 26

idk writing this song idk lol not pushing me to sing it lol

Answer 27

Haha well it's just a passion, nothing to get angry at someone over. I means srsly. People take these things way too seriously. They feel like they need to write a good song in the first place and that they just can't. It comes so easy to me cause of one thing: IM LAZY. Haha its true! I just sit around and wait. Wait for inspiration, wait for results and it all comes out okay. And as for not pushing you to sing it, well you're just as much a person as I am. You know, you have your freedom and you don't HAVE to to do anything.

Answer 28

i like it!

Answer 29

Cool thanks lol alot of people said that, I knda thought it sucked at first lol

Answer 30

This is INCREDIBLE!

Answer 31

Haha please stop youre killin me

Answer 32

No I'm serious! You write songs wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy better than me!

Answer 33

Haha well just wait for inspiration and its easy as help :)

Answer 34

Good job!! Its really good!!

Answer 35

Haha thanks lol

Answer 36

Your welcome!!

Answer 37

Wow this is the longest strain of comments Ive ever generated!

Answer 38

David, this is amazing. I love you so much just for writing this. <3 I can really relate. My best friend died 3 motnhs ago. This is exactly how I feel.

Answer 39

awh this is so nice!!! ;D

Answer 40

:D.....SUSAN

Answer 41

It sounds fine :)

Answer 42

hhahhah thanks

Answer 43

i am a lil sick tho so ya my voice sounds off lol

Answer 44

ya I can tell lol but still sounds good

Answer 45

hahah thanks but i dont think so my voice sounds alful right now i hate being just a lil bit sick it messes up my voice

Answer 46

Yeah same here. It sucks.

Answer 47

Join the fun susan!

Answer 48

what fun?

Answer 49

my voice sucks thats for sure lol when i am sick

Answer 50

Oh well you know, you'll get through.

Answer 51

lol ill sing it again once i am feeling better lol