Question

I wrote another song dudes. Take a look?

Answer 1

"My best effort"

How could I ever
oh whatever
I'm done with these endeavors
(Alone I walk away)

I thought forever
but it was never
please don't pull the lever
(Will womeone save the day?)

I'm awaiting
anticipating
Of all things I'm just hating
(Just get out of the way!)

So...

I'll walk a little longer
climb a little higher
run a little farther
the straits are dire

Why's it over?
four leaf clover
just my luck
it's only three
(Is it too late?)

The path is winding
still reminding
life is short
but not for me
(I'm under hate!)

So...

I'll walk a little longer
climb a little higher
run a little farther
the straits are dire

I see the end
about to bend
only myself can I lend

Walk
climb
run

Answer 2

@Susan9419 @bobbylynn @rtraylor3 @Alyx_da_Boss @kymber
CHECK IT!

Answer 3

Oh yeah @evergirl too

Answer 4

i wrote a song with a similar theme

Answer 5

ITS GOOD

Answer 6

Awesome. :) If I could get some people to sing my stuff, I could make a whole ALBUM

Answer 7

cool

Answer 8

its cool ;D

Answer 9

Haha thanks

Answer 10

Its good ;)

Answer 11

I wasn't tagged. :c

It was really good! d(^_^)b

Answer 12

Oh haha sorry @jazy

Answer 13

@Josuelito What you think?

Answer 14

lol its alright :P But seriously that was great!

Answer 15

Haha thank ye

Answer 16

its gud, i like yur lyrics
lol, im trying to make an album too

Answer 17

Haha cool maybe we could work together

Answer 18

YAY!!!

Answer 19

Haha what?

Answer 20

ok,lol

Answer 21

I happy!!!!

Answer 22

Why? lol

Answer 23

lol if u work together lol :)

Answer 24

Oh haha yeah

Answer 25

Its really good again!!

Answer 26

Thank ye, thank ye

Answer 27

It's awesome, David. I like it a lot!