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Answer 1

send an attachment....

Answer 2

I will help you out.

Answer 3

Olivia Yako is currently 20 years old. She comes from a very unique ethnicity. Her family comes from the northern part of Iraq. Olivia's ethnicity is Chaldean, retricerian. There is a big population of the Chaldean Christian community in Detroit, Michigan and San Diego, California. In mid February of 2011, Olivia and her sister Silivia, who happens to be her twin, attended the "Movie Guide Awards" that involved soap opera actors and big movie actors like from The Chronicles of Narnia. Both sisters felt well connected with the actors and actresses in the Christian community from the movie guides. In an interview, they both mentioned how much they were both inspired by the movie guide actors and, a year later, both sisters continued taking film study acting classes. Olivia and Silivia both grew into natural comedians and are wanting to pursue an acting career in the marketing business to show their raw talent in the acting industry. The sisters are willing to make their debut in the acting business by working on a popular film in the future. There is much hope for the sisters in becoming the next generation award-winning actresses.

Answer 4

@perfectlyimperfect could you check that for me? I'm in the 8th grade so im not that experienced :P

Answer 5

This is what I came up with; just afew minor spelling errors and run on sentences:
Olivia Yako is currently 20 years old and she comes from a very unique ethnicity. Her family comes from the northern part of Iraq. Olivia's ethnicity is Chaldean and Retricerian. (Not sure if that is a typo…or if you had it correct. I’m not sure…you might just need a comma between the two because I’m not sure what either words mean.) There is a big population of the Chaldean Christian community in Detroit, Michigan and San Diego, California. In 2011, Olivia and her sister, Silvia, who happens to be her twin, attended the "Movie Guide Awards" that involved soap opera actors and actresses in mid-February. It also involved big movie actors like Narnia. Both sisters felt well connected with the actors and actresses in the Christian community from the movie guide's. Attending an interview, they both mentioned how much they were both inspired by the movie guide actors and a year later both sisters continued taking film study acting classes. Olivia and Silvia both grew up being natural comedians and wanted to pursue their acting in the marketing business. They wanted to show their raw talent to the acting industry. The sisters are willing to make their big debut in the acting business by working on a big film in the future. There is a lot of hope for the sisters as being known as the "big award-winning actresses" in the next generation.

@NY,NY Has about the same as me haha, great minds think alike. Being in tenth grade, I feel old. xD

Answer 6

me too, i didnt really know what "retricerian" was....

Answer 7

Fix what?

Answer 8

we both wrote responses with some changes.

Answer 9

Yeah, we both corrected grammar and spelling mistakes for you. It has been fixed...

Answer 10

we have. scroll up and see.

Answer 11

We wrote above? Here's an attachment too...