Question

Can anyone proofread my government essay?

Answer 1

Okay, well, to begin with I don't think you fully understand the three branches of government. Or, if you do, you didn't convey it quite right. You're saying the president checks up on congress to make sure that they are acting constitutionally, but that is a judiciary responsibility. Anyways, I have began proofreading, here is the link.

Answer 2

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1A4Cw0ABhgqDcMV8uqrKc5emz-w--_trBbDra5TFvjcc/edit

Answer 3

Could you explain the first question mark at the beginning please?

Answer 4

The president who nominates the executive branch officials and the congress that approved them. Doesn't the president need to make sure that the executive branch officials are faithfully exercising executive power, by his inherent or clear delegation that the president gives them?

Answer 5

I'm not understanding what you're trying to say. Hopefully this does not come off as rude, but did you read the constitution? If not it would be a good idea to, and it isn't that long . It outlines the duties and restrictions of each branch. The president(who belongs to the executive branch) enforces the laws and the judicial branch makes sure that everything is constitutional. I'm really sorry if I'm misreading what you're trying to say.

Answer 6

I'm just saying that the appointed officials and and the president are under executive branch of government and the president as chief executive is require to make sure as the high official in the branch that the lower official are carrying out the law faithfully on his discretion

Answer 7

Okay, yes. I understand now. Thanks. I will continue to proofread. So far all I really see are grammatical mistakes.

Answer 8

I have more stuff I'm adding to essay right now

Answer 9

Here the rest of the renaming essay