Question

Can someone look through my short paragraph so all the grammar and comma's and semi-colon are used correctly?

Answer 1

I added a comma here, removed one there, and changed a couple of semicolons. All-in-all, it's pretty good.

Frequently, people hurt others through small or large incidents. Cruel individuals tend to go another degree to attack with harsh words. Today, in this society, it is easy to be bitter on the Internet (usually with teenagers); writing harsh words behind a computer gives the person a powerful role. People go around feeling wrong about themselves, listening to unpleasant thoughts, and feeling unworthy. Critical people are the ones who are beaten down; of course, they want their enemies not to be joyful: they want them to be miserable. Generally, evil exists in the human mind and overrules their actions. There is very pittance amount of happiness in their lives. A personal experience and a historic event exemplify that people who have been hurt in their lives cause pain to others.

Answer 2

thank you so much!!!

Answer 3

No problem!