Hi, I am learning English as a third language and I'm very bad at it. I wrote a small text and try to see if there're some errors, if anyone can take a look at it I will really really appreciate it! thanks!

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anonymous · Answer

what's the text that you wrote?

anonymous · Answer

I can take a look at it :)

anonymous · Answer

Where is the text? I would love to help

anonymous · Answer

Thanks guys, it's here! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zoLMmyDdihN8CyqKDlMKS7q2iLiV5Muzia_z_MgB3c0/edit

anonymous · Answer

This is amazing. I myself could not find a single grammar error, and I am so good at English, that I correct my teachers.  You writing this with English as your third language is almost unbelievable. I must say I think this is better than most people can do with English as their primary language. I give you very big props. You have a very vivid, and diverse vocabulary like myself. I enjoyed reading this. Keep writing, :)