Question

Ok So my question is can someone give me an example of a thesis! Plz My topic is school uniforms and I think it shold be manditory

Answer 1

ok then ill write your thesis for you but first give me a medal

Answer 2

this will be your thesis

Although having independence to freely wear what you want sounds pleasing, wearing uniforms to school has many benefits for the student.

Answer 3

it has to be arguable u know?

Answer 4

now in your essay u have to right why its better and give supporting evidence

Answer 5

write*

Answer 6

ohhh.... So u have to be apart of 1 side but argue te other side also

Answer 7

exactlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy its the last sentence in the first paragraph and the thesis has to be debatable not just assertive

Answer 8

Ok thanks thats all

Answer 9

WHY should the uniforms be mandatory? Be specific. I assume you have chosen your 3 main points. Work them into your thesis.

Answer 10

Well do the 3 main points go in the thesis??

Answer 11

Yes.
If you tell me what your points are, I can help you incorporate them.

Answer 12

1. uniforms provide a beneficial preparation of future careers.
2. It is cheaper than letting kids choose what they want to wear
3. Uniforms satisfy religious and cultural beliefs

Answer 13

I'm not sure where you were going with your last point. I used my own, but feel free to change it back. This is just to give you an idea of how to incorporate your points into your thesis.

Although students express themselves through their attire, a school uniform will benefit them in many ways: it will save them money on school clothes each year, it will eliminate distractions so they can focus on their assignments, and it will prepare them for the inevitable workplace dress code.

Answer 14

Thankk U!!

Answer 15

No problem! Good luck! :)