Question

My instructor said that: Sentence structure and/or word choice sometimes interfere with clarity. In addition, Sentence structure and/or word choice sometimes interfere with clarity.

Needs to improve sequencing of ideas within paragraphs and transitions between paragraphs to make the writing easy to follow.
Sentence structure, word choice, lack of transitions and/or sequencing of ideas make reading and understanding difficult.
How can you help me I am online student. I cannot come into your office.