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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Can someone help me with the following sentence it has two ands in it and it doesn't look proper to me? The battle consisted of eight attacks carried through horrendous rain and over grounds that were soaked and muddy.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I would change it just a tad, but the two "ands" are fine. The battle consisted of eight attacks, carried out through horrendous rain and over grounds that were soaked and muddy.

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